Zachland's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[fluidmotion]

good

a really good animation. didn't like the guy's walking animation but good for a start. Your getting better.

[It's Cold Inside]

woah

that was seriously f***ed up. But the mood of it was consistent and it had some form of entertainment.

[The Important Mission]

I loved it

I figured out the ending way before he got the hammer

[Edgar the Alien Episode 3]

good

really good animation..needs better sound syncing and it was kinda boring.

NEDP responds:

Thanks for the feedback :3

[Badass Gladiator Rage]

nice

it's really good..but the sfx sucked. if the sound was better I'd give it a 9 or 10.

[Angry Dog - Be My Bitch]

not my favorite

i like the angry dog series but this one just for some reason did not seem as goo as the othersd.(which is why i gave it an 8 not a 10) I laughed the most at the ending credits picture.(it was awesome)

[Me and My Mustache]

it's ok

why did you use techno greek music. (i should know i'm half greek)

[Sonic V Knuckles]

needs improvement

it's a start but it needs improvement. I've just started using flash a while ago and i'm a noob too, but a few things you need to do...

1. Get rid of the white background behind sonic, you could probably do this by clicking on the white and deleting it.
2. Get a better background or backgrounds. Get more background sprite sheets and don't don make them that big.
3. control the audio. It's kinda simple. Just edit the audio.

Check the tutorial section on newgrounds for more hints and stuff(that is where i learned a lot of stuff that helped me)